New Year’s Day
New Year’s
Day is first
day of year.Many
people stop working
and live at their
home. Some people
go back home
for celebrate.
On New
Year’s Day, my
family wentto the temple
to made merit.Then
we went to
visit my grandparent
at Nakhonchaisri. We
didn’t forget to
buysomething for grandparent.
My
uncle and his
family came to here also. Then werespected to
grandparent andbeg for the
blessing.Then
my mother cooked
for dinner with
me. Then we
have dinner together
and I didn’t
forget to take
photograph for my
memories. That day
we exchanged the
gifts together. I feltexcited for
my gift. I
gave a gift
from uncle’s daughter.
the story is good
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