My ExceptionalPerson
Ploy is my
younger sister. She is the
most amazing person
in my family.
She’s not like
other younger sister
of me. She
has oval face
and long black
hair. She has
big eyes and
long eyelashes. Many
people applaud her
beautiful eyes. She
has white skin
because she always
wears sweater and
moisturizer lotion. She
is small and
slender because she
does not enjoy
eating. But she
likes to drink
milk. I like
her smile because
she has canines
and beautiful smiles.
She is talkative
about fashion with
me. She isneat and
more diligent than
me. But sometimes,
she is very
lazy. She likes
to wear a
big waist watch
and she collects the
waist watch.
Last
year on
my birthday, she
makes me surprise.
She bought a
cake and a
gift to me.
I felt surprised
with that thing.
She made me so happy
and cried. She
cried too because
she is sensitive
and easy to
cry. I hugged
her and said with
her that I
loved her.
This story is good
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ตอบลบHer sister is pretty.
ลบShe is lovely girl.
ตอบลบShe is pretty girl.
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